College Of William And Mary Optional Essay

 

William and Mary Application Essay Prompt

 

Beyond your impressive academic credentials and extracurricular accomplishments, what else makes you unique and colorful? We know nobody fits neatly into 500 words or less, but you can provide us with some suggestion of the type of person you are. Anything goes! Inspire us, impress us, or just make us laugh. Think of this optional opportunity as show and tell by proxy and with an attitude. For additional context, check out the William & Mary Admission Office video message.

 

A “tell us anything about you in any way” essay, this prompt is giving you a chance to express parts of yourself that may not be present in the rest of your Common Application. The playful tone of the prompt also gives you the freedom to take risks without fear of repercussions; it is fine (and encouraged!) to think outside the box for this particular essay. Do not feel as though you need to write in traditional paragraphs.

 

Rather, you can choose to write in lists of quirky “favorites” with brief explanations for each one (favorite flower, favorite song to sing in the shower, favorite Pokémon). You could write a Petrarchan poem or a rap about an aspect of your character. Write a letter to your future college roommate or your future self. Keep in mind that the medium you choose for this essay can reveal a lot about who you are, so take time to think about creative ways with which you could present yourself to W&M.

 






 

If you choose to write in a more traditional format, consider making the content of your writing less orthodox. That being said, do not force yourself to be creative or choose a quirky topic that you do not care about. What admission officers want to see is another side of you; they just want to get to know you better. So whatever topic you think can help them understand you, write about!

 

Still, try your best to choose something about yourself that sets you apart from other applicants. Are you really interested in jellyfish, having read hundreds of pages about different species and traveled to observe them in their natural habitat? Were you the first person in your family to try skydiving? Did you create a startup with a couple friends? The ideas and beliefs floating around in your head are unique to you — show the College of William and Mary why you will be an irreplaceable part of campus culture.

 

Possible Topics

  • A quote that has shaped who you are and who you want to be
  • Which color you would use to describe yourself and why
  • The one object you can’t live without and why

 

If you are stuck and having trouble coming up with a topic idea, we suggest going to other institutions’ Common App supplements for ideas. The University of Chicago comes out with quirky, innovative prompts each year, which offer more creative ways to reveal aspects of your personality. Don’t overthink this prompt: simply choose a topic you’re passionate about!

 

With these tips, you hopefully have a better understanding of how to write the College of William and Mary’s supplemental essay. As always, do not hesitate to reach out to CollegeVine consultants for further advice!

 






We Admit It! We are at a bit of a turning point regarding our optional submission.  Don’t get me wrong, we really like the prompt:

Beyond your impressive academic credentials and extracurricular accomplishments, what else makes you unique and colorful?  We know that nobody fits neatly into 500 words or less, but you can provide us with some suggestion of the type of person you are.  Anything goes!  Inspire us, impress us, or just make us laugh.  Think of this optional opportunity as show and tell by proxy and with an attitude.

Our prompt is a bit out-of-the-box.  It’s original, it’s erudite, it’s quirky; it’s W&M.  It was designed to allow our applicants to feel free to be out-of-the-box, original, erudite and quirky in their response to our prompt.  We didn’t want them to feel constrained by the standard five-paragraph essay, formal writing style, or tired topics.  What we worry about is that when combined with our video message (written by Associate Provost for Enrollment and Dean of Admission Henry Broaddus and designed merely to show our prospective students that those reading their applications are humans and not autobots), the two together might put undue pressure on our applicants to go a bit overboard with their optional submission.

Honestly, the instances of overboard optionals are not overly commonplace.  I would wager that over 90% of the optional submissions we receive come in the form of downloadable printed content (essays, poems, creative writing submissions, etc.).  But sometimes we do get some crazy stuff rolling into this office in postal shipping containers the likes of which seem proportionally infeasible.  We’ve gotten everything from footwear (representing that applicant’s proverbial foot in the door), to baked goods in the shape of famous campus landmarks (yes, we received a Rice-Krispee-treat Wren Building), to a used cast (no, I’m not making that up, someone actually sent us their used arm cast…I think we were all so grossed out we have forgotten what it was meant to symbolize).  We’ve also gotten scrapbooks, videos, green-and-gold-striped pole vaults, jewelry and stuffed toys dressed up in W&M gear.   These items likely take a great deal of time and money to create, an enormous sum to ship (as many students Fed Ex them), and more likely than not they do not have an enormous impact on the decision we make (this is not to say that we didn’t appreciate the effort but oftentimes the over-the-top submissions don’t provide us much substantive information about the applicant).

So the question is, are we pushing you too hard?  Does our prompt unintentionally put more pressure on you to come up with something extraordinary rather than making you feel more relaxed about being yourself?  If so, what’s the next step?  Do we change the prompt or just the way we talk about it?  Do we need to be more explicit about what we want and what we don’t want as a response?  What did you do for your optional submission and what impact did you hope it would have on the Committee?  Your feedback on this one (via the comments) would be greatly appreciated.

Wendy Livingston, ’03, M.Ed. ’09
Senior Assistant Dean of Admission

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