Basic Essay Formula
Writing an academic essay means fashioning a coherent set of ideas into an argument. Because essays are essentially linear—they offer one idea at a time—they must present their ideas in the order that makes most sense to a reader. Successfully structuring an essay means attending to a reader's logic.
The focus of such an essay predicts its structure. It dictates the information readers need to know and the order in which they need to receive it. Thus your essay's structure is necessarily unique to the main claim you're making. Although there are guidelines for constructing certain classic essay types (e.g., comparative analysis), there are no set formula.
Answering Questions: The Parts of an Essay
A typical essay contains many different kinds of information, often located in specialized parts or sections. Even short essays perform several different operations: introducing the argument, analyzing data, raising counterarguments, concluding. Introductions and conclusions have fixed places, but other parts don't. Counterargument, for example, may appear within a paragraph, as a free-standing section, as part of the beginning, or before the ending. Background material (historical context or biographical information, a summary of relevant theory or criticism, the definition of a key term) often appears at the beginning of the essay, between the introduction and the first analytical section, but might also appear near the beginning of the specific section to which it's relevant.
It's helpful to think of the different essay sections as answering a series of questions your reader might ask when encountering your thesis. (Readers should have questions. If they don't, your thesis is most likely simply an observation of fact, not an arguable claim.)
"What?" The first question to anticipate from a reader is "what": What evidence shows that the phenomenon described by your thesis is true? To answer the question you must examine your evidence, thus demonstrating the truth of your claim. This "what" or "demonstration" section comes early in the essay, often directly after the introduction. Since you're essentially reporting what you've observed, this is the part you might have most to say about when you first start writing. But be forewarned: it shouldn't take up much more than a third (often much less) of your finished essay. If it does, the essay will lack balance and may read as mere summary or description.
"How?" A reader will also want to know whether the claims of the thesis are true in all cases. The corresponding question is "how": How does the thesis stand up to the challenge of a counterargument? How does the introduction of new material—a new way of looking at the evidence, another set of sources—affect the claims you're making? Typically, an essay will include at least one "how" section. (Call it "complication" since you're responding to a reader's complicating questions.) This section usually comes after the "what," but keep in mind that an essay may complicate its argument several times depending on its length, and that counterargument alone may appear just about anywhere in an essay.
"Why?" Your reader will also want to know what's at stake in your claim: Why does your interpretation of a phenomenon matter to anyone beside you? This question addresses the larger implications of your thesis. It allows your readers to understand your essay within a larger context. In answering "why", your essay explains its own significance. Although you might gesture at this question in your introduction, the fullest answer to it properly belongs at your essay's end. If you leave it out, your readers will experience your essay as unfinished—or, worse, as pointless or insular.
Mapping an Essay
Structuring your essay according to a reader's logic means examining your thesis and anticipating what a reader needs to know, and in what sequence, in order to grasp and be convinced by your argument as it unfolds. The easiest way to do this is to map the essay's ideas via a written narrative. Such an account will give you a preliminary record of your ideas, and will allow you to remind yourself at every turn of the reader's needs in understanding your idea.
Essay maps ask you to predict where your reader will expect background information, counterargument, close analysis of a primary source, or a turn to secondary source material. Essay maps are not concerned with paragraphs so much as with sections of an essay. They anticipate the major argumentative moves you expect your essay to make. Try making your map like this:
- State your thesis in a sentence or two, then write another sentence saying why it's important to make that claim. Indicate, in other words, what a reader might learn by exploring the claim with you. Here you're anticipating your answer to the "why" question that you'll eventually flesh out in your conclusion.
- Begin your next sentence like this: "To be convinced by my claim, the first thing a reader needs to know is . . ." Then say why that's the first thing a reader needs to know, and name one or two items of evidence you think will make the case. This will start you off on answering the "what" question. (Alternately, you may find that the first thing your reader needs to know is some background information.)
- Begin each of the following sentences like this: "The next thing my reader needs to know is . . ." Once again, say why, and name some evidence. Continue until you've mapped out your essay.
Your map should naturally take you through some preliminary answers to the basic questions of what, how, and why. It is not a contract, though—the order in which the ideas appear is not a rigid one. Essay maps are flexible; they evolve with your ideas.
Signs of Trouble
A common structural flaw in college essays is the "walk-through" (also labeled "summary" or "description"). Walk-through essays follow the structure of their sources rather than establishing their own. Such essays generally have a descriptive thesis rather than an argumentative one. Be wary of paragraph openers that lead off with "time" words ("first," "next," "after," "then") or "listing" words ("also," "another," "in addition"). Although they don't always signal trouble, these paragraph openers often indicate that an essay's thesis and structure need work: they suggest that the essay simply reproduces the chronology of the source text (in the case of time words: first this happens, then that, and afterwards another thing . . . ) or simply lists example after example ("In addition, the use of color indicates another way that the painting differentiates between good and evil").
Copyright 2000, Elizabeth Abrams, for the Writing Center at Harvard University
Basic Essay Structure
A good way to approach an essay is to envision it as a three-part project. An essay is made up of the introduction, the body, and the conclusion.
An introduction should answer three questions:
- What is the paper's subject?
- How does the paper approach the subject? This is where you let the reader know how your paper is organized. Here you briefly introduce your main points or the evidence that you will use to prove your point. You should move from the general to the specific, and, ultimately, your thesis statement. Try to interest your audience. Why should the subject be important to them?
- What is the paper trying to prove about the subject? This is expressed in the thesis statement. The thesis is usually the last sentence in the first paragraph, and it clearly states the argument or point you want to prove in your paper, and, depending on what the professor asks you to do, it may also include a solution to a problem.
The body consists of everything between your introduction and conclusion, and it is where you discuss the evidence that you have in support of your thesis statement.
Don't assume that your body will be only three paragraphs long. You may have been taught by previous teachers that an essay, by defintion, involved an introduction contained a thesis that stated exactly three points that you were going to prove, with a paragraph for each of the three points, followed by a conclusion. College professors sometimes refer to this as the "five paragraph monster" because many students have developed the habit of writing this way. Metaphorically, students have put themselves inside a confining box that they can't climb out of. This is a very simplistic, limiting approach to writing an essay. So why were you taught it in the first place? Think back to your childhood. You were probably taught to ride a tricycle before you got to a two-wheeled bicycle. You may have been given training wheels with the two-wheeled bike. The five-paragraph template is the essay equivalent of training wheels. You should be able to keep yourself steady on your own now--it is time to lose the training wheels. An essay can have any number of main points, and you may expand on a main point across more than one paragraph. Research essays will go well beyond five paragraphs, and are typically seven to ten pages long.
Your first body paragraph is a good place to expand on your thesis and introduce further explanations of what you are going to prove, as well as defining key terms.
Each body paragraph should do the following:
Provide a transition from the last paragraph and introduce your point
Explain your point
Give supporting evidence (quote, paraphrase, or summarize relevant information from your research, making sure to cite it)
Explain how the point and evidence relate to your thesis statement. The whole point of each paragraph is to relate your point to your thesis, but it helps to spell it out clearly in at least one sentence of the paragraph; we call this the "topic sentence," and it does not have to be at the beginning of the paragraph.
|Sample Structure for a Body Paragraph|
Transitionfrom previous paragraph.
Topic Sentence (could be elsewhere in paragraph).
Transition,Idea #1. Explain(supporting details, evidence, citation, illustrations (citation if from source), tie to topic sentence). Transition,Idea #2. Explain (supporting details, evidence, citation, illustrations (citation if from source), tie to topic sentence). Transition,Idea #3. Explain (supporting details, illustration (citation if from source), evidence, citation, tie to topic sentence).
(may provide transition to next paragraph).
The conclusion summarizes the main points you have raised in support of your thesis, reiterating the thesis.
A conclusion doesn't have to be lengthy. In many ways, it mirrors the introduction. In fact, the introduction and the conclusion should be the last parts of the essay that you write--as long as you don't start writing the body until you have a tentative thesis in mind: your controlling idea.
Remind your reader of why the issue is important. Reiterate the thesis--but try not to simply repeat it word for word.
Remind your reader of the proof you offered to support the thesis.
Do not introduce any new facts or arguments--if you think of any and they are relevant, create body paragraphs for them or move the information to existing body paragraphs.
Organization in a paper is important not only because it makes the paper easier to write, it also guides the reader through the paper. A clearly organized paper will better hold the reader's interest and convince them that your thesis is valid.